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Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth: Divine Machine-Making Master

Vada_Jude
Vada_JudeLv2Vada_Jude

Things aren't looking too good. Translation is getting worse but still not obvious. There are minor plot holes appearing now

Vampfan1
Vampfan1Lv13Vampfan1

190 Miles to the South??? I think that that should have been 190 Meters to the South!

Devilstorm
DevilstormLv15Devilstorm

I know that it's fantasy/sci-fi, but please at least use a little bit of realism.

CaptainBoyHole
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