Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeon of Niflheim

Very whimsical and well written, looking forward to reading the rest 🙏

great chapter

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Great start. Most of the novels I've read about dungeons usually revolve around the MC being the master, not the dungeon itself, which is why this one is so interesting. Very well written and no grammar mistakes so far. Looking forward to this!

thanks for the chapter Author San. keep up the quality work bro.

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Genuinely funny, honest and a great first chapter. Dark is a character who gives answers yet subtly sets up questions for the reader. Love it

Thank you for the chapter

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I really like this premise. I came here expecting another Isekai and instead got this. Don't get me wrong, I can binge read Isekai for days, but I really like what you've done. After all, why can't an unfathomably powerful being just create a consciousness that suits its exact needs? Why would they bother with interdimentional kidnapping when they can just tailor make an entity to suit their purposes?

good

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Could have been an organic dungeon story that uses their powers through intuition, trial and error. To me the systems feels a little fake. Let's see how it is executed and hold judgement untill then.