Comments of chapter undefined of The Ocean Dragon's Bride
The Ocean Dragon's Bride
JinnaDennis
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I like that you showed the repetition of events instead of just saying that the same outcomes keep happening. I think the only thing that I didn't like is the main character's "woe is me" thinking/attitude. If she's been through so much and gotten as far as she has, then I think she'd be stronger and maybe more resilient. But overall, great chapter. And I love that we get a glimpse of the dragon too!
