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Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Thief

Daoist240262
Daoist240262Lv4Daoist240262

So far the story is good, but there are some minor errors. Need a proofreader.

darkergrim
darkergrimLv4darkergrim

Yeah no I hope nOt

FluxleX
FluxleXLv4FluxleX

in this novel whereever mc becomes naive, stupid, arrogant i want to go mad but the age of mc being 12 is making me calm

SundanceKid
SundanceKidLv14SundanceKid

These overreactions from the MC are really stupid and make him seem like an absolute moron. please stop doing it author.

Roman123
Roman123Lv5Roman123

I hope his childish stupidity will pass soon? He is a nayvny for a child from trusheb where everyone is like wolves.

Cultivator_Cat
Cultivator_CatLv14Cultivator_Cat

But they still find him… no its but they still found him… Tons of grammar mistakes.

Spectre_er
Spectre_erLv1Spectre_er

So much info dump

_DaRK_MiST_
_DaRK_MiST_Lv4_DaRK_MiST_

She Totally Exposed Herself.

Robert_C_7044
Robert_C_7044Lv15Robert_C_7044

Yep dumb

Daoist5EvKfd
Daoist5EvKfdLv3Daoist5EvKfd

Al fin un wey que no es loko asesino , psicópata xd . ¿ supongo que se volverá uno más ?

Nirot
NirotLv10Nirot

thanks for the chapter

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap