Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Thief

I love the concept, plot, etc. My only suggestion is having the chapters properly proofread and edited. I don't want to judge the book to early based off a few chapters. However, It was hard to fully enjoy because of the grammatical errors. Keep up the hard work. It's only a small critique and not putting down your effort. Thank you.

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Thanks for the chap

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sounds good so far, just hooe its got lemons, he is a thife, with a little hoty he saved, only natural to round up the whoke story is to have decent lemons, other wise it would feel that something is missing.

thanks for the chapter