Raging_Bu11
Bruh~ your concept is great...... but some things are lacking.....š¤š 1. Character development/growth. 2. (Most important thing) side characters interaction & growth. 3. World background of mc ( like what is he even helping in shop ~ does he knows cooking. ) , his living conditions, he doing something to pass his time & his gf nature/work. 4. He doesn't even remembers his girlfriend anymore š 5. MC's research on boxing š„~ 6. Perks of knowing futureš¤· after_all he's a transmigrated character, he should take advantage of it. š¤ Again loved the concept & thanks for the chapter. Hopefully you will improve & won't drop. last thing ~ it's a bit rushed try to slow down a little & add the above mentioned things in this fic. šāāā