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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Hajime no ippo

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Omaewamo1413
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keep it up

Raging_Bu11
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Mc look's like this now after training. He has black hair minus the glasses.

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Young_fruit_Smiley
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Bruh~ your concept is great...... but some things are lacking.....šŸ¤žšŸ€ 1. Character development/growth. 2. (Most important thing) side characters interaction & growth. 3. World background of mc ( like what is he even helping in shop ~ does he knows cooking. ) , his living conditions, he doing something to pass his time & his gf nature/work. 4. He doesn't even remembers his girlfriend anymore šŸ™„ 5. MC's research on boxing šŸ„Š~ 6. Perks of knowing futurešŸ¤· after_all he's a transmigrated character, he should take advantage of it. šŸ¤— Again loved the concept & thanks for the chapter. Hopefully you will improve & won't drop. last thing ~ it's a bit rushed try to slow down a little & add the above mentioned things in this fic. šŸ‘ā­ā­ā­

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Satyr_o7
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thanks for the chapter

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RamenGuy
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Thanks for the chapter

Sau11
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thx for chapter