Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeon of Pride, Laplace
Dungeon of Pride, Laplace
ViciousPepper
Chapter comments5
I was hoping he would get out of bed with the title be demon earl I guess there is a part 2 of this chapter
He wasn't just explaining how his [promotion] works. It was both a mix of how Simon feels and why he feels so. Theoretically the author could omit this but according to this notion the novel would devolve merely to a list of vague actions rather than an actual story. Such paragraphs add flavor to the story. Besides we got ne info like how he needed more purifying crystals and of higher quality. Personally I would also like to see more numbers regarding DP. Author shouldn't be lazy about numbers when he has a system novel.
Alvin_Iamhim:the author is going in a snail pace . it took 5 paragraph to explain why he's not worry about the limited bloodline which we already know about
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