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Comments of chapter undefined of The Reincarnated Falcon

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LordOfSandDunes
LordOfSandDunesLv4LordOfSandDunes

Yeah the quality between this one and the Lucion one is like day and night. But this one was a nice concept too would like a rewrite

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Rewrite the reincarnated falcon.

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Haatim_Osman
Haatim_OsmanLv1Haatim_Osman

Rewrite the Arryn heir story

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JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11JustTiredOfPicking

yeah, rewrite this one, if possible. this one is kinda messy...probably because you were sick and took many brakes...it kinda lost its flow...

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1vel
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If youre rewriting some of the fics id prefer you did the lannister fic.

DaoistulHOjn
DaoistulHOjnLv1DaoistulHOjn

Buena historia pero las actualizaciones son muy inconsistentes y lentas.

Caciqxe
CaciqxeLv4Caciqxe

Honestly i would feel more interested in a smaller house like Osgrey, Darry, Butterwell, Strong of Harrenhall, Caron of Night song. Something like that. Stark and Lannister are too overused with the exception of Arryn, but it gets boring when the MC is born already as the heir of the most powerful houses. I would probably end reading whatever you make but it would be great if at least you give some thoughts to my suggestion.

Luis_Salinas_8936
Luis_Salinas_8936Lv3Luis_Salinas_8936

I can’t wait for the next chapter to come out

Gerson_play
Gerson_playLv2Gerson_play

El halcón reencarnado