NotStupidReader
its hilarious how you write in your synopsis the mc is “cold-blooded, prideful and greedy” when he’s anything but that. Then you got these little instances where you try to add a sentence saying “i’m only doing this bc i’m greedy” and think his personailty should then be described as greedy. If he’s doing anything greedy then i would agree he is, but the only thing he’s done is say he’s greedy not actually act greedy. or cold-blooded, AT ALL. Just say you’re mc has a hero complex in your synopis, nothing to be embarrassed about.