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Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

Pandora_5_2000
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Nika_L
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Can we have some nice lady to come along and save Skender from this pitiful life please? I don't think I can see him destroying himself like this and everything else around him along the way.... šŸ™šŸ»

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K_Deck
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Hmmmā€¦. So what exactly is the situation with Skender? He apparently asked for wine in his castle after he returned from the attack by the shades, but remembered nothing the next morning. Is he fully cognizant as ā€œSkenderā€ now or is his demon in control? He remembers the deal with Marieā€¦ so, Iā€™m just confusedā€¦ And did Angelica actually touch Rayvenā€™s fangs?! I appreciated their alone time, but wasnā€™t sure how it went from there. If she had dreams, we donā€™t know what they were yet. I hope we hear some more from her soon on that.

JP_reader20
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In between all the madness and confusion, it was nice that Angelica and Rayven had a intimate time, both of them needed. Now am concerned about Ske nderā€™s attitude! Hope his destroyer side didnā€™t win

chinawa
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Skender is back, I'm relived that he is getting better now. But something's definitely changed. I think he got control of his demon already... but still being careful atm, otherwise he would've hurt the people around him now...but he remembers them. I'm just not sure what's going on with his entire being. And how his deal with Marie works. Maybe there's a part of him that is accepting too of what Ramona truly felt for him..and a part of him is very hurt still that's why the last line of the chapter. I guess he was showed of the past while he was recuperating? As for Rayven and Angelica..I'm glad they get to have time for themselves. thankies for the chapteršŸ˜Š

LilJ_2003
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Not sure what I'm feeling about the change going on with Skender šŸ˜¬

manakiolsen
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Thanks for Chapter Jas, answered a few questions but as always you added more questions to the pile. You know how to keep us on our toes and keep us coming back for more!

Elena_650
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Part 2. Regarding Ramona, Constantine and their love affair I have come clean to Manakiolsen. Iā€™ve told her why I have resisted the idea that the feelings he shared with Ramona had only been romantic on his side. Even if it was not meant to be I had wanted them to not have been totally unrequited and just a delusion on his part. What can I say, being seen only as ā€œthe friendā€ makes him look sad and that makes me sad. But it looks like Iā€™ll have to accept it and give up. If I keep hoping, Iā€™ll be as delusional as it seems he was. In a comment that for some reason disappeared (why?), Jasmine warned me Iā€™d be sadder. Looks like she was right. Things with Marie donā€™t look promising either. I was hoping she would turn out to be a good person since I kind of liked her for him as I thought it could be refreshing to have a completely different type of FL, but she was very insensitive and shameless. Though Zarusā€™ appreciation of the ā€œauntā€ is probably biased, as she fried him on the way out and she isnā€™t necessarily old as she somehow sounds, Iā€™m feeling defeatedā€¦ It is probably too soon to lose hope but even if she turns out to be good and has her reasons or if as in my imaginations she knows ā€œheā€™s the oneā€ and that is why she comes across like thatā€¦ the whole thing is very sad. Call me mean but at least Rayven found out about the price. Heā€™s been so clueless (or should I say, as always?) that he didnā€™t even know that it wasnā€™t only his life that Skender potentially sacrificed by unknowingly unleashing his powers to help, but that there was something else, his body and his dignity as well. Someone replied humorously to a comment I made about that. Meaning that for a man, sleeping with a woman however much she forced him into it, wouldnā€™t be a sacrifice. Letā€™s forget for a moment that I have had my hopes for Marie, that I would or wouldā€™ve liked her to be the one or that something good could eventually come out of this. Whatever it turns out to be, for him it is a sacrifice because he isnā€™t doing it out of desire. Who cares if as a man, anatomically speaking it is easier for him to get (involuntary) pleasure from that? We already know that as women everything is worse. Specially that kind of deal. But that doesnā€™t mean it is right to dismiss that it is violent as well for a man. Why should we reduce them to beings for whom that kind of encounters can be just business and always fun? Truth is, it can be difficult for them as well and as women, we shouldnā€™t complain about them not having anything else in their minds when we are ready to treat them as machines who couldnā€™t possibly have a difficulty with thatā€¦ He sold his body. ā€œDonā€™t say it like thatā€ wonā€™t make things worse as it is what it is, and it wonā€™t change the facts... ā€œMaybe being a w ore will feel betterā€. Better than being stuck in a delusion for 500 years? Perhapsā€¦ The self-worth in both situations is way below the groundā€¦ So very sad.

cking14
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Iā€™m worried for Skender. I hope he can control his demon and his normal demeanor returns.

jirusama
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As much as I did wish for a witch as Skender's future beau, aunt Marie's attitude was concerning. I don't want that for Skender. šŸ˜­

MaeveSolace
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Thanks Author!!! Although Skender's story seems so sad right now, I believe he will get to meet someone that will make him look forward to the futureā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø. I hope he will find his Queen soon enoughšŸ„°

moemoe45
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Books inside the comments.. Great updates. Skender is off, but I don't think it's his Destroyer taking over. I think his powers are coming to the forefront. He needed that time to deal with the massive undertaking his body was dealing with. Excited for more.

Lynette_Lucas
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. Surely, I would read another couple of chapters tonight if they were available. I am looking forward to the continuation of this excellent novel on Tuesday of this week.

K_Deck
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Check out Jasmineā€™s Instagram for some visuals for this book šŸ’™ She is @author_jazzmine

kt_cali
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This chapter answered some questions but still left plenty unanswered. I think Skenders demon is in control right now. When Skenders body gets better I hope Skender will fight to have control over his demon. I also wonder if it was Constantines father who killed Skenders parents also. Hmmm

Carolyn_V_Singer
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very much looking forward to Skenders story and hearing about his parents, Ramona and Marie. I hope he becomes the defender and doesn't let his demon get the best of him.

DaoistvL7fP9
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Soooo happy Skender is awake

Elena_650
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Part 1 Hello border line Skender, Dr. Skender (The Defender) and Mr Destroyer, here you are. As I anticipated last chapter, he wouldnā€™t wake up in full destroyer mode but somewhere in nowhere land. After what happened I suppose that it is already quite an accomplishment waking up looking normal somehow, testament that his good nature and heart are still fighting back. But, with constant provocationā€¦ how long will that last? I said last chapter: ā€œMy personal opinion is that he will wake up with some resemblance of normality, but he wonā€™t be entirely himself anymore. I mean, if he were to wake up in full destroyer mode there would be no story left, would it? Heā€™d be killed by the Arch shortly after as Lucrezia said. For story purposes I think we will have to see him walk the line between the bright and the dark sideā€ Soon enough there will be ā€˜episodesā€™ and heā€™ll start lying. The ones who care for him will dismiss it out of the wishes of their hearts but will soon realize that somethingā€™s off, nothingā€™s quite alright. It has already begun. Blayze will probably be the first to be at the other end of his new demonic powers and smirking self if he continues like thatā€¦ and he will. A part of me says, go on, as long as he doesnā€™t dieā€¦ let him burn for a whileā€¦ But the Skender I know and have loved wouldnā€™t do that. But something will happen for sure, and I suppose that the relationship between them will be a theme in his volume and that at some point Blayze will have to give a turn. Also, as I said back thenā€¦ his demon likes wine. A glass of wine every day, some doctors prescribe but here it is probably a reflection of how demons are more prone to sin and viceā€¦ Rayvenā€™s jealousy is definitely more related to his pride. I mean, if after being mated to Angelica he still has a shred of doubt regarding her feelings, then I doubt anything can help with that, except maybe the conversation they still owe each otherā€¦ We heard how many couples couldnā€™t get it right. How the mating bond would only work if there was something true and solid behind, if there was true and total surrender of body, soul and heart. He canā€™t be having doubts about her feelings towards Skender after that. He seemed better this chapter. Hoping heā€™ll soon get over of it, jealousy or pride. It would be wise if Skender took Zarusā€™ advice about leaving things as they are. But even if he decides to do it (and it is unlikely if he confirms that it was Constantineā€™s father who killed Ramona, even if he now feels like a fool for having loved her), Constantine wonā€™t stop coming at him to provoke him, to trigger him till heā€™s out of control. He doesnā€™t care about anything or anyone except his objective. As long as he gets to kill his father, little does he care about what Skender might do out there as a destroyer, before heā€™s killed by the Arch. I suppose the thought that Skender might try to kill him as well must cross his mind but as heā€™s manipulative and sly heā€™s probably more than confident that heā€™ll be able to find his way out of thatā€¦

Geri_Blair
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Thank you Jazz! I love this storyā¤ā¤

Lena_420
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Skender and his demon has been united , I guess. He isn't the same sweet king he used to be and Rayven noticed that change. I truly hope the change will be for good and not bad though.

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