Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness
Heart of Darkness
JasmineJosef
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I love Rayven and Angelica togeather. I think this will be a exciting love story. Rayven is really thinking of everything .I hope Rayven,on his own thinks to give his old clothes to those who would need them. lucrezia would like that also. Rayven and Angelica will grow togeather for the better .love this story. thanks Jasmine! can't wait for more!
Well, one thing I love about Jasmine is humor and she has a lot of that. I think almost in every chapter thereâs something that makes me laugh. It makes the read so much more enjoyable. Angelica and her thoughts really crack me up. Itâs been one week since they got married and the teasing game has just begun⌠Unless something happens, I donât think at this pace it should take too long (no matter how long it will seem to us). Itâs really wonderful watching Angelica, so passionate and curious, so in touch with herself, owning her desire, not feeling ashamed. There is no right way to approach sexuality as we are all different but if there is a right way, sheâs definitely a good example. Letâs not forget we are talking about the old times when there was very little information, and everything was considered sinful and shameful⌠Of course, sheâs blessed to have with her a man with whom she has combusting chemistry, but she could still be shyer and more repressed and instead, it all comes very naturally to her. Anyway, since I am so annoying with my social awareness, I always have awfully present all the servants and maids. I hope Lord Rayven learns to treat them well. Since heâs so rich to be throwing clothes away đđ I hope he will be generous and pay them well, make sure they have a good mattress and a bed. That they are healthy and rest well. That Sarahâs knees and scars stay in good condition. If he doesnât want it for his wife nor should he accept it for his maid who is by the way a 15-year-old girl⌠I love that Angelica eats with her and that things with Simu seem to be going well, I quite enjoyed that little exchange. I have hopes for him and Iâm curious to see what Jasmine will make of him, heâs one needing redemption as well. Changing subject, I got my answers as to his bathing and as to his laundry. Angelica definitely needs to knock some sense into her very rich though thoughtless husbandâŚAs for her comfort, isnât there a room in that whole castle that has a privy and dresser and maybe an adjacent bathroom? Not for her to hide from his eyes, just thinking something more spacious and comfortable for both since he probably should try to start bathing in his house (Iâm just so annoyed that he can do that and I canâtđđđđ)⌠The room with the balcony, I still have my eyes on that. As for the rest it was all beautiful and funny. I found it hilarious that Rayven unknowingly is doing the same as Lucrezia. Since Angelica cares, if not being compliant, someone else will be punished for her⌠Not that I would find it funny if he did of course, but the strategy to get her to eat is. Mutual scolding, a goodbye kiss and the coupling of their different identities to build a new and shared version of their now shared room. And then, after all that, a most precious gift. As precious the gift as him choosing it for and finding out (and I do want to know how he did). But the most precious of all is the promise. The promise of freedom yes, but of a future together, to ride side by side. The mare is hers to name. I thought of Angel, but that is her husband given name, distinctive and unique and only for her. Iâm sure sheâll come up with something beautiful. I also think that it is about time he asks her to start calling him by his name⌠I know heâs attached to the âMyâ of it but⌠weâll need to find something else. Whenever theyâre ready, easiest thing would be âMy loveâ. She cannot keep calling him indefinitely âMy Lordâ at this point it is starting to sound strange. Another ovely chapter! Thank you Jasmine once again. đđđđ
Ugh my HEART! Hot rayven is so so welcome here. Heâs so sweet and caring, buying her gifts, learning her interests and joys. I love that he knows not to scold her because nothing will come of it đđđ he really is getting to know his wife and i couldnt be more on board. Cant wait for more of these two!!
