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Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

Boltzzz
BoltzzzLv15Boltzzz

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Tararizer_01
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Going to see the witches was funny. Poor Lazarus. šŸ¤£ I thought Rayven would get some insight and help with his Angel but guess not. Was Angel's mom a witch? Did she lock away Angel's abilities? I can't wait to find out! Loved the chapter Jazzy! šŸ¤©

Dusti_Martin
Dusti_MartinLv14Dusti_Martin

Anyone else take great pleasure watching Lazarus get toyed with and virtually beaten when they tossed them out? No? Just me?

Elena_650
Elena_650Lv14Elena_650

God, I love Skender šŸ’™ā€¦ I know Iā€™m probably such a bore with this, but I think heā€™s so great. Heā€™s good, kind, smart, responsible, grown up and he still got his whole smirk and tease going on that makes me laughā€¦ all while being so melancholic and sad. Heā€™s like someone many times defeated who keeps caring to try, like a dad to the rest of the demons and like a widower who canā€™t reassume his love live. I keep thinking that he keeps trying to become the man heā€™s supposed to be because thatā€™s what Ramona wanted him to be. I donā€™t have a problem with him being better than Rayven because the truth is, he has been so far. Nor do I have a problem with Rayven being jealous, I think itā€™s good. Rayven needs to look at that mirror and instead of just be jealous, improve himself. Skender reminding him of all he didnā€™t do to help should be no just source of shame but a motor for him to do better. I am however proud of his mature thinking, that however bothered he might be, she shouldnā€™t suffer for it. And being a little insecure isnā€™t a bad thing. Being pathologically insecure is a problem but holding a little reasonable doubt isnā€™t bad but normal and even healthy, we should never be too full of ourselves. Besides, Iā€™ve been saying it for a long time. Rayven respects him, even from the beginning. It is good for him to have a different role model other than his dad. Whole thing with Lazarus cracked me up but I was proud as well. He went there with Skender to help with no benefit to himself. He then got extra fried but he probably deserved that muchā€¦šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ Anyway, we have learned more things today and my heart feels lighter. Defenders are Archdemons and Angelicaā€™s powers are dormant. The shades mustā€™ve been to her place looking for a clue as to who hid themā€¦ I hope they didnā€™t find any and it lies among her mother's things she brought back from her house. I hope we will be seeing the witches again. Lazarus might even fall for one of them (and wouldnā€™t that be something?šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚)... Skender probably went there looking for a spell to make Lord Davis forget. He really did try. And such a hard time he got back then, poor man. Anyway, Iā€™m pretty sure Constantin has something planned. Rayven needs to start using his brain, that temper of his isnā€™t the best and now that he has his heart, he needs to be careful, he could walk into a trapā€¦ Canā€™t wait for Angelica and Skender to meet, to see William againā€¦ Loooved the chapter. Iā€™m all into Rayvenā€™s and Angelā€™s romance but I love the rest of the story and characters and Iā€™m always so happy when they pop up. Thank you Jasmine, I enjoyed this chapter so much šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

so is Angelica a witch?šŸ˜± the demons - witches encounter is partly informative and funnyšŸ¤­šŸ˜‚ (Lazarus why d'you have to flirtšŸ¤£) More possibilities,more questions, a whole lot of answers for Skender,Rayven and co to find out.

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

My theory: Angelica is a prophet and while prophets are not necessarily the same person over and over they do carry memories of the past prophets. Maybe that's why Skender was looking for her, to find out maybe some of Ramona's memories. I think Angelica is the actual prophet, between her and Will, the original prophet, the intended prophet. Maybe prophets don't have visions from early childhood but a little later on. Maybe around the time Angelica started having hers , her mom locked her powers with a spell that transferred them/some of them to her brother knowing that a male prophet would be not expected therefore not in danger. Maybe her mom's death was the required sacrifice for the spell. On a different note, my favorite thing about this chapter was Skender revealing he has seen the witches before when he tried to help Angelica's father. The fact that he kept his gesture to himself, without any need for praise or recognition , the fact that he put himself in danger to right a wrong he felt responsible for.....chapeau, my King! As for Lazarus, funny as always....I hope that beautiful witch who toyed with him will be the heroine and lead female of his book. Thank you for the chapter, Jasmine. I was thinking earlier how wonderful your imagination is not only because of how you tell the story but because all these different characters live there. The way you paint each one of them with different colors and different brushes staying consistent with their patterns, so many relevant, different, interesting, unique characters...then your command of the language and the twisted, intriguing plot... You are amazing and have a beautiful mind!

Kaia234
Kaia234Lv14Kaia234

Angelicasā€™s mom died When william was born so is that why Wills power are manifested and Angels is hidden ??

cking14
cking14Lv15cking14

Loved this whole chapter and the brotherly relationship shown between them. Like bickering siblings, but still working together and supporting one another. šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Tessa_Whalen
Tessa_WhalenLv15Tessa_Whalen

Looks like Rayven is a little hot and bothered too šŸ˜šŸ˜‰ The witches were fascinating! I hope to see more of them to come. And i hope Skender and Rayven can figure out how to unlock Angelā€™s abIlities! If they end up in nightmares, Rayven eill be right there to support her šŸ’— Poor Lazarus šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ He always kills me! Thanks for the chapter!!

saraimamatx
saraimamatxLv13saraimamatx

Thereā€™s witches too?!

April_m
April_mLv14April_m

Will Skender come talk to Angelica after he talks to William? Seems like it's time for one of William's weekend visits.

xMagicBagsx
xMagicBagsxLv15xMagicBagsx

Interesting to have the witches join in they seem fun šŸ˜…šŸ˜‚but they didnt help much, hopefully William can be of more help in finding a way to protect Angelica and release her powers.

Sa_tine
Sa_tineLv13Sa_tine

This is getting better and better!

Boreas17
Boreas17Lv14Boreas17

is it possible both of them prophets? or Will became prophet becuz Angelica's power was sealed? why their mother sealed only her powers but not Will's? so many questionsšŸ˜… can't wait to find out answers. also looking forward to their talk with Skender

Jessica_Zagorski
Jessica_ZagorskiLv12Jessica_Zagorski

Rayven being jealous and possessive I see! Oh if he only knewā€¦ his angel is closer to Falling for him than he realizes.

amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

I canā€™t wait to find out more! Now there are witches involved? The plot thickens for sure.

manakiolsen
manakiolsenLv13manakiolsen

More questions, ahhhh this is killing me!

Daoist7ut6YQ
Daoist7ut6YQLv15Daoist7ut6YQ

Only the one who hid them ??? Does that Possibly Mean her Mother is alive?!?! Great Day in the morning! My heart is dying Right now ! Could the woman In her dreams Be her mother ??? I seriously Am obsessed With This story! Please release More than one chapter At a time ! I AM STOCKED UP ON COINS šŸ˜‚

Shannon_Crawford
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QueenofSpades
QueenofSpadesLv14QueenofSpades

I really believe that William can help guide Angel somewhat. He has always been able to talk to her and clarify things. He was not able to share certain things because he did not want to break confidence but since she knows I think itā€™s time for him to visit her. It would help her a whole lot!

Lira_3047
Lira_3047Lv12Lira_3047

Was her mom a witch? Do they come from the bloodline of the woman Skender loved? I also I wonder how Rayven feels knowing he canā€™t protect Angel from Constantine.