Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness
Heart of Darkness
JasmineJosef
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That conversation on the carriage is precious😍 Rayven's capable of sweet talks 🤭❤️ I love that they get to share that beautiful moment💕 My fave thought of his was..he wanted to be her husband!!!🥰 You certainly can do all that now, Rayv's.Loving their development ❤️ I wonder who was the man he's gonna go after, his mind says he knew already!😬 But before that RayRay, talk to Angel first of what happened that very night. It'll be traumatising to talk of that dreaded night but it'll be a relief for her to have some comfort. Angelica's just too pure❤️ Healing starts now for the husband and wife💕 thankies Jazzy!
So, questions and answers: 1.It is unlikely for shades to attack on broad daylight. Had been wondering. Good to know. 2.Isn’t Angelica’s house Lord Green’s property now? I am confused. From what Rayven has said it doesn’t appear as if he’s met Lord Green yet. Would Lord Green relinquish the ownership of the house that in any case would be William’s inheritance (since women can’t own anything) just because she married Lord Rayven? I doubt so…He has the titles to it, doesn’t he? I thought the people she saw coming in and out might have been people who would be perhaps looking forward to buy it…? But it seems as Lord Rayven is sure no one will come. Maybe he’s just counting on getting it back. Who would dare deny him? And some reflections as well: 3.Lovely to see how Rayven’s internal dialogue is changing. There’s doubt and fear but also hopeful and considerate thoughts. A will to live, to be with her, to make her happy, to be her husband, to make her his mate… I still can’t believe it when I see it😲😲😲 4.It’s painful how much he is afraid. But he has reason to be. It’s a lot to take in… There’s no easy way to do it, except her seeing it… but it is the easy way for him, not for her. And in the middle of all of this… there’s her father… and that dream of hers…She’ll also have to deal with the fact that he was Demos… and will be very angry to know that she was compelled. 5.The ironies of life. Or the ironies of death. But I knew this would happen. He is now terrified because he feels fragile, however difficult it might be to kill a demon, now that he has his heart, he can die. He’s not only scared that as an addict, he might be tempted but that he may just die at someone else’s hand. She’s begged him twice not to leave her and told him that that would kill her. So, he’s terrified… Well, I’m also scared that something of the sort might actually happen, him getting hurt badly. I’m confident that he won’t die though, as there would be no story after that😳😂 6.So funny when he asks himself is she misses being in her old house lol 7.I’m confident something will be made of Simu. I’d like to see his character grow and know more about him. It is true what Angelica says, this “revenge” against him was something good. It stops him from hurting anybody else and instead of repaying him with cruelty it gives him another chance. He can better himself if he wants. 8.“Hurting them will not make me hurt any less, or you”. Revenge, cruelty for cruelty poisons and darkens the soul and the heart. “He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. When you gaze long into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you“. said Nietzsche. He couldn’t have been more right. The relief of revenge last only for a little while. It is a bottomless pit that swallows you whole. The things that she tells him are priceless. She doesn’t ask him to do nothing but to do something good and not to act while enraged. There is so much he needs to learn from her. She rises above. One could wish there would be more people like her in the world. 9.I totally knew guilt would come back and bite him and hit him hard. If there was one person who could’ve stopped her going through all that, that was him and he’s the one I have blamed most along the way. But I don’t think it could be helped… But it is going to be very hard for him to come to terms with that. I really hope she can help him. Right now, it seems that the challenge isn’t only him telling her that he’s a demon but for her to be able to help him with the guilt that has finally found him, for letting that happen to her. Self-harming and self-punishing… seem to be served. And you know what’s the worst part? He cannot truly find comfort in her because he can’t get too close to her because his demon will react… and he cannot let that happen until he’s come clean… and he’s not sure how to do that…God, all of it is still really hard. I think we hit a plateau but now there’s once again a mounta
Oh Rayven please don’t punish yourself. Angelica gets hurt when you punish yourself. Listen to her and focus on things that heal both her and you. Oh heck: flirt with her more; make her blush and laugh. That is what will heal her. She will teach you that everything you did in the past was the wrong way. Embrace this new way!
Jasmine, your writing is amazing! I came to this app because of Married to the Devil’s Son and I have read other books since, but you are absolutely my favorite author by far! Was so shocked and excited when I saw you had a second book here and have devoured it immediately!!! I LOVE this story and the characters!!
Oh my he is becoming a true husband 🥰🤭 I do hope he doesn't disappear to hurt himself. Do not let him leave Angelica! She needs to tell him she is pure and they were not able to hurt her. Rayven go write her poems instead of hurting yourself. That will help her heal, you do not need to punish yourself.
