Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness
Heart of Darkness
JasmineJosef
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Hello everyone š. Hope you guys are doing well. Thank you so soo much for the great reviews and lovely comments š„°ā¤. I saw several comments from you guys being interested in other characters stories as well. For those who didn't see my comment about the story, I plan to write a story for each of the seven deadly sins. So everyone's story will be told. As for William, the plan for now is that his story will be told throughout all the 7 stories. Hopefully, this answers some question. Let me know which of the 7 deadly sins you are most curious about to read next. Take careš and lots of love ā¤ š¤
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What an upgrade this story has been. I mean MTTDS is amazigĀ 100/100 But in my opinion HOD is just in another different level. The flow of the story, the characters development is just out of this world. It is as if i am seein everything with the eyes of my mind. Jazzy you have grown so much in this twoĀ books. MTTDS was the reason i got started on WebNovel and Heart of Darknes is the reason I am staying. I have said this before and will continue to say it again. Your talent should be showcasted worldwide and I hope to one day hold a hardcopy book of both MTDS and Heart of Darknes or see it adapted in a movie or series. Keep writing please, you are amazing. Best regards Jazzy. š„°
When I go back in my mind to re-check and make sure and then come backā¦ I conclude that although itās very difficult, this is the chapter I find most beautiful so far. But it isnāt only because of the obvious. It is the subtlety, the way in which so many emotions and things converge that I find so evocative. Intimacy is vast and the range here touches both the emotional and sensual. The emotional surrender comes for both. There is surrender both in helping and caring and in accepting help and letting be taken care of. Thereās humbleness in both. After finally giving in to all his pain, allowing himself to cry in her arms without shame, he came because he wanted to be with her. In the bath or anywhere. And he wants both, the bath she prepared for him, and to be close to her to be cared for by her. Do they have to be exclusive? Sheās already seen him bare. Nakedness is only a continuation; he is bare in every way. The symbolism of this scene is breathtaking, the rendition, the vulnerability it implies, the trust that it takes. It is the first scene of an actual marriage taking place. Him allowing her to be his wife and letting himself be a husband under her care. And for the first time ever, he said thanks. It is very emotional and painful, yet beautiful and tender. I feel so connected to him and to her. Heās finally beginning to use his brain that has been only used for agonizing. Thereās a different use of language and tense. There is a question that finally begins to pertain to her. How is she? And then another question. One that dwells on the future and the desire to live and be with her. How to tell her? The scruple of not wanting to get too close until she knows but not being to help it, the plan seeming thoughts about how to tell her, the recognition of being so afraid. Thereās been a breakthrough and huge progress is being made. Still, I am afraid. It is difficult, you know, when youāve spent so long wanting something. āBad habits are hard to overcomeā as Lazarus said. When the possibility lies there in front of us all of a sudden, even if youāre no longer sure, if you no longer want it, something pushes you to it, maybe even a feeling of debtā¦ debt to all the years you invested yourself. I wonder if his heart has always been there. Like his face. Waiting to be awakened and brought back to life when he finally faced and gave way to all of that suppressed painā¦ Maybe Lucrezia played with his mind. You canāt kill something thatās already dead. Maybe thatās why he couldnāt kill himselfā¦ Last chapter Lucrezia touched his chest. Then afterwards, while at the rim, he felt his heart clenchā¦ and then he also felt afraid. Afraid of what? Of actually dying and doing that to her? And now it doesnāt feel like his heart is bleeding but that heās growing oneā¦Is Rayven realling growing one will Demosās is dead? So much has happened and as Lucrezia said, so many things heās done thinking he was doing them for other reasons than the actual ones which he kept hiding from himself. His marriage to her, cutting his face. We have come to the turning point where he is to fully become Rayven. But for that he now needs to make a conscious decision. Reacting is no longer enough. Or making good decision masked as evil plans. He needs to make a choice. The choice of living. To honor his mother and his sister even if itās harder. He needs to do it for her. Because she needs him and he cannot hurt her. To love her and take care of her.ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤
Your sin is the one that binds them all, the root of the Seven Deadly Sins. Your progress has helped to clear the path for your fellow passengers on the road to redemption. You are their Amazing Grace and Angelica is the key š that opened the door for all. Unconditional Love is indeed the way. William will bring much soothing balm to all. For he is the Magi, the bringer of wisdom light to guide the way on the path of redemption. What a MAGNIFICENT storyline you are developing, Jasmine. This is the story of life in general - the journey of humanity, from the fall from grace and the journey back to redemption. Absolutely brilliant storyline. LOVE ā¤ļø It. šššššššššš
This was such an electrifying chapter! I absolutely loved it! I love how Rayven reacted towards Angelica. How he was so comforted by her. I love that his heart just appeared and he didn't even realize it. I can not wait for more! Very brilliant Jasmine! I really wish that a famous author seen your writing and it like "yes, I want to met this woman who has/is writing these books"! You so deserve it!
