Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

Oh man, I laughed so much at this chapter. Rayven has no idea what he is up against. 🤣🤣 Angelica doesn’t follow his rules anyway, so who has bets on when she accidentally breaks this one? He will soon learn she will always run to him when she is afriad.

Everything Rayven does to push her away only seems to draw her closer. Remember, she’s the best person you know! You aren’t used to dealing with someone like her. 😘 Shouldn’t it say something that she’s more aftaid of bats than she is you, Lord Rayven? 🖤

Goodness Jasmine, I'll day it again. you may not update as much as we want (and we want a lot, 10 chapters a day every day wouldn't quench our thirst for your stories) but when you do it is breathtaking !!! you took me almost through the whole spectrum of emotions in these 2 chapters. Brilliant!!!!

Thank you Jasmine for the AMAZING ChAPTERS!!!!!!! ❤️

Rayven and his rules! Just another thing for Angelica to ignore 😆 I can’t wait to read about the wedding ceremony.

Will they kissed on their wedding ? Will Rayven lose it to be near her and to see her in her wedding dress . Hope William give him some advice. No touching my foot.. Anyway. thank for 2 chapter Jazmine.

I believe Angelica is turning Rayven on just by being her sweet self. It’s time for Rayven to cherish the gift that he doesn’t deserve.

I hope she touches him every chance she gets🤣😂 He cannot handle how he feels and makes these crazy rules to try and make himself feel better 🤯 He wants her so bad…just give in Rayven

Oh Rayven stop trying to run away or push her away. I am loving the slow build up of them together but deep down I am so impatient. Cant wait to get the love between them where he stops running and accepts her and his new heart ❤❤

No touching? Seriously, Rayven? 🙄 Why is it always one step forward and two steps back? So frustrating!

Thanks for the two chapters Jasmine! I love it and am looking forward to the next one.

No touching, wonder how their wedding night will go then? Although I know he doesnt plan to consumate, but I’m sure she is expecting it to happen.

I hope we have a great kiss for the wedding, where Rayven actually loses himself for a minute. I wonder what the wedding night will bring!!!

No touching !! I bet you will be the first one breaking this Rule!😉 Rayven little by little you will let yourself live with her by Your side!

Oh Rayven so far all of your rules get changed by her. You think she is going to obey the no touching?

Another rule 🤣🤣🤣🤣

So many Silly rules

Brilliant chapter Jasmine, on the get together of The Magnificent Seven Deadly Sinners. Love Lazarus statement - to return to who they were - or be better than who they were . That’s the journey you are taking us on and I am looking forward to it. This is the ultimate goal of life, after having fallen, through selfish desires, then comes the gradual ascension from darkness into light of one’s true nature. I can deduce why Lord Rayven is a central hero of the tale, his redemption,having fallen to the lowest depths, is the greatest tale of all. Great storytelling Jazz, you’re simply amazing - from MTTDS now to HOD is simply BRILLIANT 🤩🤩🤩 Looking forward to the wedding 👰 planned.

Getting ready to attend Angelica and Rayvens wedding 🤣 hopefully they ask him to give the bride a smoosh 🤭

Oh my gosh this was a great chapter! I could not stop laughing! First Skender calls him a caveman 🤣, then Lazarus tells Rayven about himself and gives him advice and then he tries to scare Angelica away and that backfires on him. Oh Rayven our man child it is time to accept the way you fill about Angelica and that all the guys are right! Thanks again Jasmine for delivering another exquisite chapter! Loved it!