Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

Hello everyone 😊. Hope you enjoyed the first chapter from William's POV. It is not easy not having any days without work so thank you for your patience. I will update the missed chapter from yesterday tomorrow ❤

Ok so new ship? Will grows up into a strapping young man and sweeps Lucrenzia off her demonic feet? He helps her finish her punishment, she saves his life and they live happily ever after?

Aaannndddd... this is why William didn't come when Angelica called him and the bats were there to keep her in the room so Angelica wouldn't notice he was gone?

Lucrezia meeting William officially😱😱loved this point of view and how we see the fierce love he has for his sister and how angry he is at Rayven for wanting to leave her!!

Very interesting chapter! Some answers yet many open questions! That's great!So she was there...probably caused the whole bat incident too, then?. When Angelica said "William" I figured it couldn't be fortuitous. So William's got a crush on Lucrezia Lol! But " it happens", that's funny. So Skender, good soul, felt so guilty about something that happened, I figure failing to protect Ramona or something of the sort, that he chose to be punished and Rayven is in a loophole. Punished for his pride, his pride, never overcome, punishes him. Very interesting indeed. I love Will so I'm all up for more of his Pov's. Also Skender's. And I hope that little by little we learn about all the Lords. But right now I really want to go back to Rayven and hear what he has to say. It better be his very first effort to overcome himself and be honest and do something for her out of choice and not out of inability to control himself. He needs to tell her what he knows her to be. Brave, smart and kind. Thank you Jasmine! 😊

But... what the heck happened when Ray told Angelica he "knew" her? How did that pan out?

What an awesome chapter!! Sooo interesting! I‘m curious now how William‘s attitude towards Rayven will be and if he will be able to remember this meeting at all or did Luzrecia compel him? 🤔 So, now we have like two cliffhangers?! Jasmine, you are really the Queen of cliffhangers 😂 I try my best to stay calm and patient while endure the torture of waiting for more chapters. Even the long chapters are not long enough. 🙈 Great work!! 🍀 ♥️

I found thIs chapter to be very Interesting - filled with answers and more questions. William has developed into a pivotal figure In this novel. I am happy that Lucrezia told William why and how Rayven had planned to leave Angelica. Hopefully, William will convince Rayven that his future is with Angelica in wedded bliss instead of in death.

Glad William and us got some answers, but of course now I have some more questions. 😂

i loved this chapter. So Will know Rayven wants to leave his sister after marriage. Now that he knows all this i wonder if his anger will subside. and Lucrezia is being punished too? that's new. also why they are trying to redeem demons? God is punishing them? Angels involved in this too maybe?

It's nice to read Will's pov. I'm surprised Lucrezia visited him in his dream. 😮 Thanks for the chapter Jazzy! Can't wait to read more! 🤗

what a great chapter! William is a very interesting young man and is always looking out for his sister. I hope Rayven doesn't disappoint him or his sister.

Thanks for that chapter! I wonder who Skender, willaim and angelica were to each oTher in the past? Love rhe way Lucrezia is described! Please another nice ling chapter?

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

I love getting to read about my favorite character. Thanks Dear author!

Wow, love this chapter

The whole demons- redeeming- demons theme has me puzzled. Wouldn't demons and evil souls normally be REWARDED for reeking havoc through using their 7 DEADLY SINS to ultimately DESTROY as much goodwill of man as possible... making life on earth a demons paradise?

Great job Jasmin , as always your work is perfect 🤩 .

William needed to understand why Rayven intentions to leave his sister. SInce, Rayven cares for no human but William, affects him. Then with William showing a coldness towards Rayven and he questioned Angle, your bother doesn’t like him. That shows William can have an impact on him. Knowing His curse and wanting to die. I can see William, as Wise as he is use that to help Rayven and in the end His Sister. Also, enjoy everyones thoughts about the chapter. Gives me deepth!