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Evelyn_J_Lopez
Evelyn_J_LopezLv12Evelyn_J_Lopez

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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slowestcook
slowestcookLv15slowestcook

I LOVE this chapter with so much William! “An old soul…” with wisdom beyond his years. Such a protector, and it looks like a savior when it comes to Skender. I love how willingly Skender accepts this, and with such emotion. Your hope won’t fail you. ❤️ Thank you for this wonderful chapter! ❤️

oirCheerio6
oirCheerio6Lv15oirCheerio6

Yes!!🙌🏼🙌🏼William stepping up showing Skender he is a King and needs to acts like one and then putting his guard up against Rayven in case he disappoints him! All for Angelica❤️❤️

FormerPD2020
FormerPD2020Lv15FormerPD2020

Young William negotiating his future! I still can’t wait to learn exactly what Angelica is

MzSmith_8933
MzSmith_8933Lv15MzSmith_8933

William is not playing games with Skendor nor Rayven! No mas! He wants a future seat at the table so he can help others while he protects himself and Angelica. And he wants Rayven to prove himself. Why did a KID have to scold the both of them... some of the things he said really stung cause it resonated with both Skendor and Rayven. I wonder what he's going to say to Angelica when they get home and how he's going to treat Rayven going forward???

K_Deck
K_DeckLv15K_Deck

Get over yourself, Rayven! A little kid even knows you are on the wrong path.

cking14
cking14Lv15cking14

William is goading him into action to protect and care for his sister. To give her a better life, one she deserves. William knows he has feelings, but keeps denying them.

Heather_8986
Heather_8986Lv13Heather_8986

What a great chapter! I do have to say this might be one of my favorite chapters so far. Do not get me wrong this whole book is awesome and I absolutely love it. The chapter was hilarious because not one person told Rayven but two. Two people Rayven did not expect would. This was classic! Thanks Jasmine for the great chapter! Actually thanks for being a wonderful, talented writer 👏. MTTDS is actually what got me reading and download webnovel. I have never every been drawn into reading books before, until I read your writing! I absolutely love this book. Actually I love anything you write! Thank you for turning me into a reader! I always am so anxious for the next chapters.

McDrea_0910
McDrea_0910Lv15McDrea_0910

Awe 😭💔 I love how strong William is becoming but my heart is aching for Rayven. He is so unsure of what is going on within him. I do hope he finally accepts living with Angelica and everyone supports them 😊

weeelizabeth
weeelizabethLv15weeelizabeth

Oohh... 😊😇😊 I just love William!!! 🥰😍🥰 So awesome... for the sake of his sister Angelica's wellbeing, he essentially "whacked" and "lectured" both Skender and Rayven, at the same time too. GREAT job!!!👍

Mitzi_Schild
Mitzi_SchildLv15Mitzi_Schild

I feel so bad for Rayven .I adore William. and even Skender. I do hope Rayven and Angelica end up togeather .I hope William makes him realize how to be with his sister. I really hope William is wrong. as far as Rayven goes

Count_Raindrops
Count_RaindropsLv12Count_Raindrops

All this time Angelica has been trying to protect William, now the Role seems to have been reversed! William is wise beyond his years, but I definitely think Angelica is part of this prophet equation. I think her powers or gifts have been surpressed to protect her until the the right people have found her. In the mean time William will lead Skender in the right direction!

Tararizer_01
Tararizer_01Lv14Tararizer_01

wow. Way to go Will! 😅 this boy's character amazes me. Such an amazing chapter Jazzy! Thank you. 🤗

DaoistPh8nDA
DaoistPh8nDALv14DaoistPh8nDA

I just love William so Brave! Thanks for the chapter Jazzy! Maybe a bonus one today?? This was such a great chapter and just not enough! I Need More!!!

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

also , I know nobody asked, but just for the sake of visuals, I'm gonna leave this here. this is my Rayven (I mean this is how I picture him in my head).

MyTigger
MyTiggerLv15MyTigger

Oh my William is making everyone think about what is going to happen. And he gave Rayven a chance to prrove him wrong.

DaoistzsyEYO
DaoistzsyEYOLv15DaoistzsyEYO

That’s right, dare him to be better!

Teresa_Gilbert_3969
Teresa_Gilbert_3969Lv14Teresa_Gilbert_3969

I love William and his honesty. He’s straight up putting them in their places and makIng them step up

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I admire William’s courage. He knows he is dealing with demons, but he is not fearful of either of them. In fact, he is schooling them - Skender and Rayven. Let’s watch William work to bring out the best in both of them. Angelica Is not like William. But who is she like? She is more than a “mere” human. We know this because Rayven can’t read her mind. When will we, Jasmine’s readers, get to know Angelica’s complete nature?

brittany_b
brittany_bLv12brittany_b

William is growing up fast!

Katherine_Bowman
Katherine_BowmanLv14Katherine_Bowman

Thank you for this great chapter Jasmine! Your writing is awesome and draws one into the story! This is such a great book and I can’t wait to see where you take all of these characters. I love William and how honest he is. He is inspiring everyone around him to be better!