Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional Descent

So pretty much the only way to get Leonel at a "disadvantage" is to 1v1 him on flat, neutral ground utterly lacking in variables or extras. Deviate in anyway and your boned.... I wanna scream plot armor but this was written in to the character in such a beautiful way that it's just a roller coaster ride of "What's Next?". Awesome you da man (woman? plate? tree? jellyfish? idk the 2020's is wild)

that was cool and precise, nicely done. satisfied lol

YESSSSSSS

You should play more with the females in this book man. Add a girl obsessed with Leonel, add a yandere, add a slave who only sees him as his master and won't leave him alone. Create more external drama instead of continuous internal drama. Its getting redundant!