Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional Descent
Dimensional Descent
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This has the same ruining factor that tower of god had. A girl that is too annoying to bear the story and a boy too obsessed over her to see anything else. I don't know how long i can read this before it goes above the line for me.
You’re supposed to hate Rachel in ToG. She’s part of the character’s development, and his obsession makes sense since in his eyes she saved his life and gave him a purpose to live. In some twisted and frustrating turn of fate, that obsession was the only thing strong enough to draw him into the Tower, and the only motivation he could fathom to keep moving on in the beginning. As the story goes on, his reasons to continue shift and grow, and his faith in Sarah shifts, evolving into more of a desire to understand. In this story, however, I get the vibe so far that Aine is part of whatever attempts were made to prepare for this catastrophe; her and the MC alike. She probably has ties to important people in the Empire, and much like the MC she probably has had things done to her body to leave her better off in this apocalypse. That said, where the MC seems to be left in the dark about why or how he is the way he is (presumably because whatever was done to him was either extremely experimental, or illegal), she seems to be much more aware. Enough so that it has given her distinct advantages over the others, and left her rather numb to everything that’s happened. Like in this chapter, for example, she’s clearly using the MCs strength to get a 2-man clear on an 8-man dimension so she can get the high-tier rewards after hearing him say he can solo-clear. Talk about manipulative. But intelligent, I guess. Her friends seem like they probably know what’s going on too, just from the way they interact. At least the one that always speaks for her. I wouldn’t say its the most original plot, but it does seem like it might evolve rather pleasantly as things unfold. Hopefully the face-slapping maintains a minimum, but I see a lot of potential for character development and intriguing world-building.
shashank_panthri:I just couldn't like Bam as a protagonist and everything behind him just made me irritated. The saying, "fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me." doesn't apply to him. Giving Rachel so many chances, when she outright tried to kill you, told you to stay away, tried to kill your friends. But you still save her all the time, it just wasn't something I could read.
Can someone come along and take Aina with them. She is killing the story imo. Boring character that the Mc is too obsessed with. Seemingly knows and understands everything going on, doesn't talk, doesn't contribute, believes the Mc isn't worth more than a lead guard dog so far. Seriously ruining an otherwise good book. Get rid of her or do something with her soon please.
