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Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional Descent

God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2God_Of_Lazinesss

nice so far, okay so first the good stuff is the world building and plot construction is very good as it show it show author's story telling and imagination is quite good. now only bad(at least for me) is probably the characters, by my personal reading experience the cast of characters introduced till now quite generic we have the hot blooded MC who has heaven defying will face any problem for his friends and family we got our classic young master who want MC's jade beauty [childhood friend (X)] love interest and will threaten you with his family, next we got MC brother like friend who always has MC back and will make jokes about girls. it not of the characters are generic but it would if there is not character development so I just hope the upcoming disaster give mc an chance to mature.

God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2God_Of_Lazinesss

it is not bad that*

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Quan_Poopsalot_7217
Quan_Poopsalot_7217Lv11Quan_Poopsalot_7217

I'm liking this already, the only thing I'm worried about is the mc being very dense. Seeing how the author writes things soothes that a bit good job. chap the for thanks

tatsuya_K_O_A
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is this Aina girl really worth it she didn't try to do anything when James was in danger she just sat there observing them. it's surprising how none of you guys are talking about it. Leonel was confronting the other guy she was just looking at him with interest so sers... how is that cool. the guy been chasing after you for so long and that all the emotions you display

4Dsushi
4DsushiLv44Dsushi

normally im not a big fan of plots where the male lead chases the female lead, BUT this is great

Drunk_Cultivator
Drunk_CultivatorLv3Drunk_Cultivator

what about James ??

MoF
MoFLv4MoF

Nice one I like this, the author show first what happened before a calamity or something. The reason I’m delayed reading this because in one site many comments sayin this guy a simp and chasing one women and being rejected after all some simp mc is annoying but this one is respectable and the best so read it, this is excellent.

meayorh
meayorhLv4meayorh

I'm already liking this novel.

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matimba_maluleke
matimba_malulekeLv14matimba_maluleke

Thank you for the chapter

Felix_Ng
Felix_NgLv15Felix_Ng

Ill give this novel a shot but mc going full creeper mode over a girl is a turn off. yea if you been rejected over 500 Times they are not interested. Also seriously dont see how “entertainment” Is ranked that much lower than professional roles. in the current world its pretty much the opposite but in this world they are basically peons and peasants? Yea not Plausible.

BlazinBean36
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facholyn
facholynLv14facholyn

Gracias - Thanks

Maria51
Maria51Lv14Maria51

A dramatic event is taking place, islands are plummeting down

Vanessa_Dollar
Vanessa_DollarLv1Vanessa_Dollar

it's really a nice story

Decistavz
DecistavzLv2Decistavz

Finally i was getting bored

Rainbows_Mom
Rainbows_MomLv14Rainbows_Mom

Wow holy moly! I did not expect that to happen!

Thymetro
ThymetroLv13Thymetro

Fantastic start 🥳🍵

Marilou_Fernandez_4383
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Hantam_Crumo
Hantam_CrumoLv13Hantam_Crumo

Good beginning so far. The building up of character and world is good. Looks like a winner and worth following...

VermillionVerde
VermillionVerdeLv14VermillionVerde

ah finally we can escape the creepy jock stalking a girl for 4 years plot

J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13J_S_2998

It doesn’t seem like he really has been able to spend any time with Aina at all….so other than liking her appearance and maybe overhearing the way she talks to her friend before school.….it doesn’t sound like he really knows her well at all. It honestly sounds like she’s ignored him for 4 years straight. I hope the author gives us some more insight into what’s going on, otherwise it makes it look like the MC is desperate to be with a girl who he hardly knows and she can’t even be bothered to give him the time of day.

cip44
cip44Lv15cip44

Great storytelling!