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Comments of chapter undefined of Beast Monster System

Pena_aQuina
Pena_aQuinaLv11Pena_aQuina

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Charles_Sexton
Charles_SextonLv15Charles_Sexton

first chapter was as big NOPE for more. poorly written. poor character development. everything screamed boring.

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shinazu
shinazuLv2shinazu

I'm voting for this because of the Shirou cover lol, a Fate fan doesn't write bad stories after all

Pena_aQuina
Pena_aQuinaLv11Pena_aQuina

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Ginmaru_kai_Lin
Ginmaru_kai_LinLv2Ginmaru_kai_Lin

C4

dewisetyaningrat
dewisetyaningratLv12dewisetyaningrat

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Bima_Mahendra
Bima_MahendraLv15Bima_Mahendra

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

XWaverX
XWaverXLv2XWaverX

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DamselinaModernWar
DamselinaModernWarLv2DamselinaModernWar

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Swiz_Babie
Swiz_BabieLv1Swiz_Babie

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ARIO_VANISH
ARIO_VANISHLv5ARIO_VANISH

(✯ᴗ✯)

Mam_6519
Mam_6519Lv14Mam_6519

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Lil_Bombong999
Lil_Bombong999Lv3Lil_Bombong999

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv5TheAncientOnell

We can't have everything sissies as Mc's sometimes is considered a fresh approach... Sigh

Nova_Chrisdora
Nova_ChrisdoraLv11Nova_Chrisdora

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire