Comments of chapter undefined of Polaris Black

I mean… he hasn’t even turned fourteen yet, who really knows what they actually want in life at the age of thirteen. Yeah, I don’t mind your opinion, really don’t. I only write when I get bored, you know? Not really trying to be a writer tbh. Though wouldn’t mine u being more specific that helps, I find it more fun to go over things and fix them. Oooh and the people being older and younger than cannon? Um can you expand on that cause that has me confused… the only person that isn’t cannon age is Amelia, perhaps I made a mistake somewhere? Cause I really can’t think of any of the cannon characters not being their cannon age. The plot holessss, please tell me more. It would be easier to fix things with more specifics- I mean I take loooonnggg breaks sometimes that I forget what I was planning to do cause I don’t really write things down at times. And yeah the fanfic is probably a mess tbh and a bore… but then again I write it when I’m actually not busy and want busy myself. Thankkk you very much really appreciate your honesty