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Comments of chapter undefined of Polaris Black

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AvantHeim
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I generally like it. the only bad thing is how slow the story progresses, especially the relationship with Amelia... I would like to he spend more time with her.

mefait
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Hah yeah I did mention that in like two chapter maybe three there will be a time skip and he’ll be 13 turning 14 in 1977. Currently trying to make the next chapter longer than usual so I can move on quickly instead of having to make more chapters to end the summer

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Divine_Cheese
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Love it thanks so much:)

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WeavingSpider
WeavingSpiderLv6WeavingSpider

Gosh, why quidditich, WHY? This just paves the way for quiddittich chapters (i dont like reading about this nonsense). so far an interesting story but maybe the pace is a bit slow (not neccessary bad though). Just a question, at what point does the cannon start? The mc is younger than sirius, by 3? years. So he will be around 30? then or am i wrong? do you want to make him a professor while harry is at school, wouldnt be so bad of an idea. or are we gonna smash the cannon to pieces and embark on a completely new journey? again thanks for the chapter, writing is good and chapters have a good length.

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Rukia_7w7
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thanks for the chapter!!

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Ashtar29
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Thanks for the chapter buddy!

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laboonlaboon
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thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

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ptbv
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thanks for the chapter

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Matesanz
MatesanzLv5Matesanz

Thanks for the chapter

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