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Gosh, why quidditich, WHY? This just paves the way for quiddittich chapters (i dont like reading about this nonsense). so far an interesting story but maybe the pace is a bit slow (not neccessary bad though). Just a question, at what point does the cannon start? The mc is younger than sirius, by 3? years. So he will be around 30? then or am i wrong? do you want to make him a professor while harry is at school, wouldnt be so bad of an idea. or are we gonna smash the cannon to pieces and embark on a completely new journey? again thanks for the chapter, writing is good and chapters have a good length.
Thanks for the input. I like the idea of him travelling about possibly becoming a professor. Though we’ll have to see which subject hmm If I don’t continue to the cannon I’ll probably end it with him travelling and ending up working in the ministry and getting a high position or something Either or
WeavingSpider:thanks for the reply, and yeah its probaply just me anyway who doesnt lkke to read these chapters. but honestly your fanfic is really good so far. some ideas: -go the professor route and have him beeing finally another good professor (honestly in the books/movies they had like 7 professors. the only good one was flitwick, each other professor was totally way to "my house you get 10 points just because" or like snape straight up bullying a child of 11 years age just because he is the child of someone. -travel around the world and create your own spin of the untold world of hp, srsly who os to say there arent dwarfs with a little hatched against goblins in the alps. or some elf village in some rainforest in brazil. maybe just show different magic communitys. thanks for reading all my gibberish