Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
Snoring_Panda
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So i aprove of people copying good stories. However, in this case you changed a few things that i think were better in cultvation online: 1. This has more game interface. Health, settings, etc. are unecessary and take away from the realism of the world. I hope we wont hear any "-5 hp" notifications... 2. Mc can just click a button to learn things. Again reduces realism of world and means that anyone can learn what he did, unlike CO where mc's talent was what allowed him to learn such a high level technique. 3. His cultivation technique was given to him without any effort on his part. beisdes the fact he didnt have to actualy learn it, he also didnt EARN it. I get though that getting him a good tech at start would have beeen hard to manufature, CO does an OK job at it, but ultimately CO still is a little forced since too lucky. A funner way to do this would be to do a gatcha wheel and so it kind of feels like mc worked for it a bit and we have hype hoping he gets the heaven class technique.
Iâm rereading/reviewing. I forgot just how unlearned the main character was at the beginning. This chapter goes well with the previous since we immediately get to see some of his âcheatsâ. We get to see the main characterâs decisions (wrong assumptions) and we get to see more of the environment. Rereading this makes me appreciate just how much the story/environment/main character develop as the novel advances.
