TheReign
Author, it's only chapter 7 and you've already lost track of your story details. Chapter 4: -quest is for 20 goblins -Beast says his bow doesn't need arrows, they are generated when he pulls the bowstring back. Chapter 6: -they kill their 20th goblin and decide to head back Chapter 7: -they kill 3 goblins, and say "We have 240 exp, and 8 fangs, but it's getting dark, let's head back". (sparky comment: What, goblins only have 1 fang each??) Forget the Chapter: - you describe Beast's quiver and the arrows in it. Chapter 8?: -they say the quest is for 20 fangs (which would be 10 goblins) I assume it's from making changes and not updating elsewhere to match, but it just about makes your story unreadable. If you can't remember the details, you should be keeping a spreadsheet or at least notes on each character and status by chapter.