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Comments of chapter undefined of Is this really a Game?!

Ste_Grama
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Fiaran
FiaranLv14Fiaran

Author, it's only chapter 7 and you've already lost track of your story details. Chapter 4: -quest is for 20 goblins -Beast says his bow doesn't need arrows, they are generated when he pulls the bowstring back. Chapter 6: -they kill their 20th goblin and decide to head back Chapter 7: -they kill 3 goblins, and say "We have 240 exp, and 8 fangs, but it's getting dark, let's head back". (sparky comment: What, goblins only have 1 fang each??) Forget the Chapter: - you describe Beast's quiver and the arrows in it. Chapter 8?: -they say the quest is for 20 fangs (which would be 10 goblins) I assume it's from making changes and not updating elsewhere to match, but it just about makes your story unreadable. If you can't remember the details, you should be keeping a spreadsheet or at least notes on each character and status by chapter.

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Lotion_99
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They need to use their abilities!!! Idk why reign hasnt bc he can imbue his hands or weapons with his ability! Wolf might not use his ability bc its only capable of a small fire and cant really experiment mid battle! I think shadow is using his somewhat.

BlueCactusE
BlueCactusELv14BlueCactusE

Thanks for the chapter

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap