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Comments of chapter undefined of In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

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TheDeathmail
TheDeathmailLv13TheDeathmail

Dude has knowledge of the series... and just follows the script... he's OP yet is staying behind for absolutely no reason... it all actually feels very forced... this is literally one of those fanfics where a random character is just inserted into the story with almost no changes...

1yr
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EdwardElite
EdwardEliteAuthorEdwardElite

He only the first part, so he is following the plot so he could prepare for anything that will happen after the story of first part.Be is simply not taking risks.

1yr
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Elder
ElderLv11Elder

I wait for 5....

2yr
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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

Too much focus on Rongrong, story isnt progressing. MC is too weak, he should be at least rank 40. MC is unimportant, doesnt do anything or change anything. Just a fly on the wall.

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Fausto_Neto
Fausto_NetoLv1Fausto_Neto

dude I didn't like him to have stolen the big boss's safe, you didn't specify if it was any place, or a safe guarded with very strong guys, you hinted that he went and stole everything without several titled douluo realizing he was stealing, titled douluo type and so useless? and why did he show his spirit ring? it doesn't make sense, then when he shows it at the academy they will link him with the clones.

2yr
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Pill_God
Pill_GodLv13Pill_God

Thanks for the chapter

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Dio_The_Sage
Dio_The_SageLv13Dio_The_Sage

Thanks for the chapter~ []~(￣▽￣)~*

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ProfJoyBoy
ProfJoyBoyLv4ProfJoyBoy

Thank you for the chapter.

2yr
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Tog_Python
Tog_PythonLv4Tog_Python

Thanks for the chapter i know i am asKing a lot but can tou do a mass release of like 20 chapters in one go

2yr
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