Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir
Chaos' Heir
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DuskyLv14Dusky
that chapter felt off... like some parts are missing. It was hard to follow the explanations and grasp the whole picture... or even a part of it
EveofchaosAuthorEveofchaos
Anastasia(Monica's mother) told the couple that Elizabeth(Khan's mother) ruined 4 arranged weddings.In the second question, the he is Khan, so he is talking about Elizabeth. Maybe I used the wrong pronoun. I'll fix it.
Dusky:Hey Eve, thanks for taking your time with me. I followed the story for so long already, maybe I've just missed something. When the explanation about the role of his mother in her family starts, there is too much thrown in somehow. She has meddled with for weddings? Where does that comes from? Also, he looked at Monica - he knew "her mother" has done so much to anger the nobles but remained a noble, who's mother... what? I'm not native speakers, maybe something just got lost in translation đ¤
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