Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir
Chaos' Heir
Eveofchaos
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A little too “speaking in riddles” and vagueness for my liking. Also, Khan is acting a bit too childish and emotional right now for what I expect. He should be a lot more calm and controlled I feel based on his character development you’ve written for him. It’s a bit disappointing to read him act like such a petulant child right now. It’s not how great he’s acted in front of these serious policitical opponents You’ve written recently where he’s just the pure picture of calm raging power. This just seems like a ridiculous emotional 12 year old having a tantrum. Im a bit disappointed.
It’s always been shown that khan is a bit irrational and very emotional concerning the Nak. This is on par for his character. This isn’t surprising as well due to how he said that he isn’ going to essentially hide himself anymore. All the self control that he has shown before will likely be much less going forward
It's wonderful to see the Nak's twisted effect on Khan. Due to being tainted, he's more open to alien arts than any other human. At the same time, the very same taint makes him reject every aspect of Nak arts, all of their intentions and purposes. He is a very well written character with deep, layered personality. Contradictive, sometimes instable, and so very lost. So human.
