Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Making sure a character has the proper motivation for his actions is what's makes the writing the novels top notch.

His mindset and these slower more world building expanding chapters are really what are pushing it to greatness. This really sets it apart from BOTDS honestly. Your care and amazing ideas for how you’re handling the development are so satisfying to read. appease keep it up! This novel is blowing your other one out of the water. It’s freaking amazing. Ive become so bored of BOTDS so this bobel is such a treat to read every ray. I look forward to reading it every morning now since it releases at 7am for me here in Japan.

you would be correct my good sir. Khans development has been steady and we have experience his journey adequately through your writing. Keep doing your amazing work.

good call on slowing it down for a few chapters... I was feeling the character development was starting to feel rushed... good job

Thanks for the great chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5 Books should have hills, valleys, and mountains in terms of pacing. You are doing great and I can’t wait to read more

I appreciate these types of chapters just to know his mindset thank you

The focus on the emotional side of Khan and his growth as a character makes this one of the best stories on Webnovel. Building his motivation and mindset through multiple dimensions of thought is more engaging and meaningful.

It's amazing how he's developing and now that he got a girlfriend I it will help him to embrace certain stuff

The shaman seems to be in the right

Good chapter

I have found, that after reading to this point, I have a personal connection with the MC. I served my country in it's Army for 24 years. I traveled around the world several times I saw things that normal person's should NEVER see. I did things that soldiers are trained to do. I too bear these scars. The authors insight into the mind of a damaged psychy is emence. Very well done. In reading thus far, I have faced some of my own daemons. Thank you.

This story is fantastic and describes in what I would call a very human and realistic reaction in my opinion and makes it easy for the reader to understand Khan more

love this story you a great story teller!

these monsters showing up are definatly because of the sunlight that's about to happen on the planet

i will skip the talk about how i like the pace of the novel and all that since many do it. i just want to say that the Monster outbreak is probably connected to the imminent sunlight but thats just my guess. maybe the sunlight has a special effect on the mana in nitis Fauna

I enjoy seeing how he is rationalizing everything. I am also very happy how much Liiza matters to him and I genuinely hope they manage to work out. Of course I'm biased and all for xeno relationships.

Thanks for the chapter, this is my favorite work at the moment.

keep up the good work author ^∆^

great chapters! would kill for more than 2 a day! keep it up!