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Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Greenfoot5
Greenfoot5Lv15Greenfoot5

Near the end you wrote George instead of Paul when they are speaking.

Kagzaz
KagzazLv14Kagzaz

10/10 I am an addict for your stories

Zook_51
Zook_51Lv15Zook_51

well he did die. seems your not pulling any punches with this story... I like it. hehe

orriewalls
orriewallsLv15orriewalls

Thanks for the chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5, What do Noah and Khan have in common? Their apparent inability to keep intact clothing and their author :p Great character development, keep up the great writing

S3ntinel
S3ntinelLv15S3ntinel

I really dont understand the mc atm does he really think this relationship has a future? He must leave the planet in the near future

Krisnan
KrisnanLv15Krisnan

Poor Glenn but I do agree this plan seemed pretty poorly thought out even if it flees wouldn't a full encirclement to slow it down and pin it in place before the big guns charge in while it is unable to run? after all turning tail and fleeing opens up openings in defense.

Blanket
BlanketLv15Blanket

Bahahah!

ExcaliburJR
ExcaliburJRLv15ExcaliburJR

Dude stays nakedish after a fight. His super hero name would be called Nake Man.

No_No_9558
No_No_9558Lv2No_No_9558

There's no gun training at all so far in the story which I believed would be op considering how powerful guns are and fusing that with magic would make them deadly. Maybe there are expensive or rare or just don't exist

Pertiester
PertiesterLv7Pertiester

Tx

MaDGoD
MaDGoDLv15MaDGoD

great job Eve keeping up