Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

oh god that’s some instant life long trauma, i hope khan is strong enough to hold it together. At least they saved the others!

birth of the demonic sword is good but i think this can be better at least in terms of character's

dammmm this chapters were so freaking good....the emotional rollercoasters of survival...I hope he wont let it effect him...its kill or be killed

Heavy end to the chapter, Khan is about to get some PTSD. I hope he finds a healthy way to deal with the guilt, being part of the global army is already showing its downsides, but i guess that he doesn’t have much of a choice because of his background. On another note I hope that he finds Martha soon. Their interactions are great and she is probably the best person to help him deal with this emotional turmoil.

So brutal.

Your doing really well with this eve, loving it bro. The pace is nye perfect and charcter building is really well done you nailed them in this 1 mate I actually have no crytisism for you eve, I did try sorry 😂😂😂

love it

Ooo im loving this i want to see how cold he gets with this

alright where is the psychological tag?

Gracias - Thanks

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter!

tnx for the chaps!!!

Cause he can definitely manipulate them by saying he will kill their daughter if they don’t answer his questions and then tell them that their daughter was dead the whole time after before killing them after all they need information and cant really afford loose ends right now

Thanks for the chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5, Amazing story telling