Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

In the beginnIng its fine to have a somehqt slower start to build the world aNd some charcters as well as following the MC. The release time is great for me, either way if im late to it im late otherwise im on the exact time.

The world building phase is a must and I like the story so far, which leads to questions about the world itself and all that revolves around it. I do like action and all but you need something to glue the story together. Keep up the good work and I believe that whatever you do, it'll be fantastic. Also, the schedule is perfect for me. Noah in the morning, Khan in the evening.

I’d say the pace is perfect, going faster would start to take the learning out of the academy arc

great pace for the beginning and the time is good. As long as you get enough rest for my daily fix for birth of a demonic sword lol.

The novel is realy Great and i cannot wait to see how the power structure of this incredible world works

I like how is going eve. and I like the release time, I read this in the afternoon and botds in the morning

very good so far and the release time works well

Loving this novel thanks for the work autor-san!

I personally think everything is great, this is the beginning of the world so it has to be properly established. I think you have I good thing going here.

You're doing amazingly well. Your writing style, and skills have improved since the beginning of "The birth of the demonic sword". I'm looking forward to seeing how this one unfolds.

Thanks for the chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5, the pase has been good. I would suggest showing world building scenes that can have action like you normally do in BofDS. You could also make Khan feel like mana history is going too slow and so he decides to ask questions instead. Some questions to show off his character and some to build the world. Name of the Wind does this well if you want inspiration/research material. The release time works for me.

Going great keep uo the paCe And build the story. I know this is a little late

Must say that usually I prefer the world building over the action at times. So no worries there, I would be fine with an even slower pace. You do you[img=recommend]

love the world building,

I may be an exception but I rather have a boring word building and after a story that accelerates than a rushed world building that gives the feeling of an incomplete or worse a world with rules constantly changing to fit the needs of the story. I have lost count of the stories I stoped reading because of that

the pace of the story is good so far,no complains here;-)

Gracias - Thanks

Pacing is perfect as is.

so far, I am enjoying the story,however, where you might lose me is when I have to start paying to open chapters. After Shadow Slave, another £100 for a book, I can't justify the expense

Thanks