Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

At least I'll start this one from chapter one...had to play catch up on the birth of demonic sword

not going to lie I was really hoping for this to be about Noah's inheritance he left in the lower plains 😭.. but I can't wait to get just as hooked on this one 😅 looking forward to it eve!

Good start Eve. The repetition on azure was a little much, hopefully it will pay off. Otherwise I would advise other descripters so yo expand on ghe importance of the colour and it’s significance to the story

Good but doesnt make sense that his mana treatment cost made them live in the slums if he got the sickness from the crash happening in the slums. Its backwards lol.

nice

nice

nice

Great introduction, I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes. 👍🏼

Awesome!!!

Ty

I see Xela has already tongue lashed you for how it resembles a certain work of lit lol still. this beginning was good

interesting ... dark as usual which is your style of writing which I'm totally into. looking forward to story

That was an awesome first chapter! Really looking forward to the future!

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This is excellent writing! Hard to find this kind of quality on Webnovel.

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starting now very good captivating 1st chapter

looking forward to a new read

Im glad to begin this journey from the beginning and now we get even move chapters from eve