PancakesWitch
EsZeus:Didn't know that each Author has to write mindlessly self thoughts from the MC. Rambling about every joke and everything. Copy Pasta all the jokes, and "thoughts" in different speeches like an insane person. I know what you mean, but if you can't realize what I mean, no one can help you :D At least try to understand it :) Not that hard. I have read over 20000 novels, easily. And a lot in first Person perspective. But only a few are going to extremes lengths like you did here. So, in my eyes, criticism that's correct. Just a little bit too much in my opinion. Still reading your novel and unlocked it. So, thanks for the chapters.
It's a good episode, it's good to help, after all, one cannot write someone who looks at everything alive as xp. I just wish it didn't happen too often. So mc better be a monster against someone who treats him like a monster. After all, while dragons are smart and civilized, a few cities tend to burn (freeze in this case) when they get angry. thanks for the chapter