Blacklares
we complain because we like the fanfic and dont want to drop, but if we dont like it anymore then theres nothing stopping us, after all this boring and uninteresting chapters i can finally let go, good luck for those still reading and just give up for the ones suffering, it only takes a push to let yourself be free.it has been great while it lasted but the good things will always eventually end and so i say goodbye guys
ok I found a fan made drawing of the main character in mlp as Alicorns with what elements they would represent and its amazing and I like to describe it so let's start. Applejack: representing the earth element as she makes mountains or creating canyons and lunches boulder. Pinkypie: represents space as she teleports and her friends were ever she wants and she can cut space in a area so intern she can cut boulder in half by cutting space its self. Rarity: represents crystal manipulation and creation she cand make every crystal in mlp universe with the capability of magical properties such as magic nullification or amplification and elementary. Fluttershy: represents nature itself as she can control all plants and to some extent animal's as she represents a type of life magic like a druid but much more powerful. Rainbowdash: represents wind and lightning but I prefer to mix them and just call them storm magic as its a mix of wind and lightning elements and as such she can create all Kinds of storm like lightning storms hail storms ect. and she can create hurricane's of catastrophic disasters. twilight sparkle: dost need and explanation as we all know she represents magic its self capable of doing all what the other Alicorns but with some resistance as its drains at least double magic then other Alicorns as she is using and element that is already under control of an actual alive Alicorn so she is a Jack of all things but can control other aspects of magic that is not under a Alicorns control with ease.
My problem is with the side chapters is that it is taking awake from the main story because you are doing them too much with the same character it it making me wonder if them is the a story about Starfall or Spike because you do them too much and focusing too much on spike also it doesn't count as a side chapter because it is part of a main chapter side chapters are chapters separate from main story chapters