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Comments of chapter undefined of The Bloody Angel

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Chad_Ashford
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Yeah, the plot is great but you will need to improve your vocabulary. Like your paragraphs are too long. So I suggest you separate them more.

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foxyash
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the book is interesting 😄

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Heavy_Helium
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The king would've never thought her daughter would become like this :D

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WyattJaymes54
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I love this story. You have exceptional talent. I would like some more action though.

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wookie0_
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I read the first chapter of novel ,the plot of your novel seems pretty cool and easy going , but you just need to practice your vocabulary a bit and it'll be dope , I read your thread in forums I couldn't reply to it but I would like to be friends with you guys cause I'm a new writter too and want to explore more if you get some free time try to review my novel “The Dream Saga” too. 🙂

raennail
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Looking forward in this story. Thumbs up for you, author!👍