Nr_Yet1208
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not bad, but I don't really feel much here either.
Interesting prologue
Is it the prologue or a part of the ending arc?!?
cool dialogues. i like how u used just dialogues to give us a taste of the setting, characters as well as your writing and narrative. Only minor thing would be ot feel more like a snippet than a prologue. đđ
haha let's see how it goes
Here come the startđ
I liked the guy( I'm assuming he's the villain).
nice start the m already liking it [img=Loving it]
it's a good story
okay, not bad
To be honest, I thought the MC was the girl on the cover of the novel with blue hair. I'm looking for a Trap MC lol.
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