Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming the Elf King’s Bride (BL)

Prince Ron have something similar with me,… don’t disturb us when reading

To be fair, there isn't much wrong with the writing, but the dialogue and main character feel... immature. I can't help feeling like the author is young and naive and writes from imagination more so than experience. In terms of the character design, I feel like their personalities are hollow, and things they do or say make little sense in the context. Hopefully it gets less cringe further along.

I'm curiosus about the elf book that Prince Ron was reading. Is it a biography? Very nice chapter. I'm going to the next. 😀

I'm liking this story, let's see how it goes

love that trait don't disturb when am reading l already love Ron

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