Comments of chapter undefined of IHAPR V.0

This had such a huge potential. Kinda sad that your writing and Mc is messy. No offense but you should really work on making the situation more realistic. I recommend reading some in fanfiction.net and study how they write there. They have some decent writing and good characterizations. Maybe you could even write a tragedy here to make this fanfic more realistic. But it's okay if you won't. Anyways, have fun on whatever you're gonna do.

Shouldn't he be neutral? Do decisions he wouldn't make before? If so, then he shouldn't care about those kids either.

happy hes not to cruel like your other mcs

Brainless logic the Author uses

this chapter was so childish and dump

chaotic neutral?

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Thanks for the Chapter

Obrigado pelo capitulo

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

I recommend using Grammarly. Its free and can fix the errors that distract from the novel.

Phew* That was close. I thought this story was about to become a Harem/Lolicon with how many females were involved.

thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Hmmmmm