Comments of chapter undefined of Alexander the Great Mage

I have watched and read alot about Alexander the great, but this is just out of the world (literally 😉) I like the exposition at the beginning it makes me want to go further keep it up.. . 🥺

Hey, I saw your book link shared on the Discord channel, and I had to do a double-take when I saw "Alexander the Great" and "aliens" in the synopsis. XD I like the concept, and so far LOVE the execution. You're a tremendously good writer: paragraphs flow well, you're keen enough to sprinkle several character-displaying moments throughout, your grammer and vocabulary both deserve high marks, the humor is good... Yes, yes~a pat on the shoulder for you. c:

Thoroughly enjoyed this. I love the way Alexander is depicted, especially his quick thinking and analysis of his surroundings.

Woohoo, it's the first step to Alexander's path of Conquest! Where once he wished to push the borders of his conquests across the known world, now he stands poised at the beginning of his conquest of the known universe!

Nice! Love it. We need more books about historical figures. Can't wait to read the next chap!

it flows very well, and the concept is nice and very well executed. Onto chapter 2 :)

I like how the first chapter quickly and easily sets the scene. Keen to read more.

first chapter is very interesting. it was fun to read. great start!

As an initial reaction, I find this interesting. Taking a historical figure as a main character is rare, but using Alexander the Great is quite logical and interesting. Aside from that, I like how this is going. Thought I can't help but the summoning army thing is a reference to a certain series.

This novel certainly introduces a new concept and has the potential to be a great book.

interesting start and I really like the premise. but readers tend to prefer shorter chapters. it's up to you though.

SOOOO GOOD! 😍😍😍😍😍

Alexander had a massive ego so I like it so far I anyone had the right to a massive ego its Alexander the great I wounder if he will name everything after himself agin

For some reason a part of it reminds me a bit of World Domination System. Which is why I'm immediately sold

Honestly? I'm hooked. This has some great twists

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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A fantasy novel about one of the greatest general in the history of mankind. But put under a system and fantasy... I wonder how Caesar and Sun Tzu would be in that kind of world.