Comments of chapter undefined of The Guardians' Throne - The First Magic Swordsman

I really love your work

decided to take a peak ahead and I'm sorry but not my cup of tea author. i really can't get into stories of an MC basically being manipulated and oppressed for God knows how long. I can understand chapter 1 pretty well but I can't take how his character has been developed so again not my cup of tea... thanks for the read up until now and Goodluck with the rest of your story

Laiex felt a shiver**

His inability to resolve the issues with his mum and willingness to accept he is going to just be a guard for a spoilt princess makes no sense. Why is he trying so hard when he doesn't know what he is doing it for. The author hasn't built up the necessity for him to push himself the way he does. If it's to help his mum after 10 years he still has no solution. If its just to learn magic, then why? when he is only going to be a fancy guard. The lack of real drive just makes the story unreadable.

let me ask something , like zaos was killed by darrun 01 in his pass where he revenged for the death of the queen but all these events in the same year where the demon lord died , so let me ask the 3 reincarnated and have the same name but only zaos remember that this is his second life or like this is regression where it is a loop and repeat everything while the time is still passing ? * btw both zaos have the same appearence brown hair and green eyes *

Finally

Need to unlock. Really want to read this.

Although I never said thank you in any chapter, it's for a reason. The reason is m only say thank u at end of novel as a whole. Thank u for this novel..And I will also read chapters ahead but since they take fast passes I gotta read them from alt accounts

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