Comments of chapter undefined of High in pursuit

I enjoy the story, it has a good plot, but for a story such as this, with a detective playing the mc I believe you should have a more roundabout way of answering plot points. For example, instead of saying, the woman was laying there with a stab wound. Say something like: The woman was lying on the road with a knife in her chest, and blood pooling around her. Her hair was splayed around her head, preserving the fear she felt in her final moments. Other than this point, this is something that I'm going to add to my library! Very good work!

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the way it started already grabbed my attention >~<