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Comments of chapter undefined of Dread Tales

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Mitsuno_Seikaku
Mitsuno_SeikakuLv2Mitsuno_Seikaku

The synopsis is great, it brings everyone the necessary information on what happened and how they got to where they are now. As for the chapter itself, it's a great opening to a story that emphasizes on post-apocalyptic scenario and how it is showed that it happens in the future with holographic technology

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A_Campbell
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Your writing is well thought out and other than a few minor corrections it's well written and grabs the readers attention quickly. It leaves the reader curious enough to want to continue reading to find out more. Well done.

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Yashan_Stephenson
Yashan_StephensonLv1Yashan_Stephenson

Pretty good concept can't wait for future releases.

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RockieAuthor21
RockieAuthor21Lv3RockieAuthor21

Nice start....and the character design is also nice đŸ‘đŸ»