The background-story of the Mc sounds kinda random. But I can't exactly tell what is wrong so I recommend u focus more on the main story. Thx for the chapter
Thanks for commenting ^^ This back story explains why he struggles to bond with people and actually trust in the things the say. It sets up a reason for his harsh personality and thoughts towards friendship. That's all it was though, I don't go deeper into it than this really except for when he decides on the main things he wants to achieve later on ^^