keanu_eugene
so far the fanfiction is very good, the only problem, in my opinion is that there is little evolution in the mc's personality in the sense, yes he was raised like this but almost 100 chapters have passed and he literally treats all the side characters in the same way of chapter 10 i.e. too slow in terms of development, this risks either causing Mc to remain like this until the end of the fic or that some event forces a change but I don't know in chapter 100 in my opinion you could have made him open up a little more at least towards momo and jiro