Comments of chapter undefined of The Alpha Loren series

I like Ella already. I'm glad she didn't tolerate Cameron's nonsense or his refusal to listen when she told him she wasn't ready to be intimate with him. This story is intriguing. It does need editing and a proofreader. I'd like to offer my help. I'm a freelance copyeditor and proofreader, and I'm trying to build up my work portfolio. Contact me if you're interested.