Comments of chapter undefined of Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
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the premise is interesting but the writing could be better. And when I say better I don't mean grammar or typos. I mean telling. I have the same issue, so I feel you. Instead of writing something like 'he looked angry' why not write something like 'he banged his hand on the table and glared'? I know it doesn't always work but it's better. trust me, I learned the hard way. or not, cause I still make the same usual misses XD
