Comments of chapter undefined of Jupiter’s Legacy: Son of Utopian(Dropped)

I really find your story interesting. The tidbit law of power are good, I didn't know about it but it fit pretty well with the the context of the story. The mc is good, not one dimensional, he's ambitious and ruthless, two qualities or defects that'll serve him well in a super powered setting. Personally I don't think you should take too long on the childhood part, I'll prefer a lot if he's a young adult already or a late teen but I'm alright with how you chose to approach the next chapters. Thank you for your work, waiting impatiently for more.

Guys vote yes or no if you want more chapters of him like this If not i will just make one chapter and go back to the kid stuff.

update Jupiter's legacy: son of Utopian

Is this dropped

This chapter got pretty carried away in the moment but ah well hope its good

Dropped?

love it can't wait for more. you should make a chapter about the laws

And him suddenly transforming into adult Imo breaks the rule of the universe ... and where did all the mass came from .... and can he control n create something from nothing?

awesome

I'm loving this keep up the amazing work

Yes more chapters like this please

Ahm.... Shazam?

moooooorrrrrreeee