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Comments of chapter undefined of In Overlord as a Humanoid Dragon

DaoitOverlord
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I was thinking about the slow pace of the story, and I believe that this way is much better than Just rushing like many others, You could take your time explaining about the attack of nazarik, like how much Time Will take to Just beat the playera of nazarik, or how the invasora get Lost in the first 4 floors, i mean You could talk about fire tramps, Fake Walls ir corridos that Will take You in Circles, teleport trapos that Will make them yo back to the precious floor in a trap room. Then You could talk about how they understimated the Guardians of the floors Just to be proved Careless and Die. Also You could talk about good ítems that the invaders Will drop and how they Will act after the loss of the item. Then you could talk about the MC beating World Champions, and winning a Title (or Job class or Even an upgrade to World Champion (5) for beat them ) for being the only player to Beat in battle all the other World Champions. Also You could talk about how he goes to other of the nine worlds searching for beter materiales to improve Revenant Body. Or how he search that materials to make another NPC.

DaoitOverlord
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Fake Walls or corridors that contain traps that Will make them teleport to the previous Floor effecttively separating the invasor Forces.

Ryu_D
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Thank you for the chapter.

DaoistuMpk8F
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Thank You for making another chapter

DaoitOverlord
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Thank You for the chapter Nice revenant